| |
| What’s Happening? |
(read the beginning of the story,
and
then take it from there!)
|
Beginning:
Logan’s heart raced like an L train through crowded city streets. The
sound and intensity shook his body. How could something so
little affect him so much? His chest felt like razor teeth
had just sunk into it. The biting pain was hard, fast and too
consistent to continue moving any longer. Just before he collapsed,
he saw it all. Like a grim slide show of what had happened
that night. How he got here. That one mistake that he
would not live long enough to fully regret. |
|
| |
| What’s Happening? |
|
The Incident
I lay there, heart beating hard and fast. I remembered walking
down the street and seeing someone with a gun pointing at me and then
BANG! I saw that I got shot in the leg, I got up and limped to
a trash can, picked up the can and threw it at the killers and down
the killer went. I picked up the killer and threw him with all
my might. I reached out and grabbed a bar and beat the killer
till he was dead. I ran down the street and to my house. But
when I reached my house I heard another bang and my mom was dead in
the living room. The man that I killed was standing next to my
mom drenched in blood and I picked up a knife from the kitchen and
threw it at him and he fell and died.
The End.
Austin R, Riverside Middle School |
|
